Essay 4 Topic

The topic I chose for the persuasive essay is that the government should make texting and driving illegal. I realize that there are already certain states that have laws prohibiting the use of cell phones, but it is not yet nationwide. I will be writing to persuade the reader that texting and driving severely impairs driving abilities and reaction times, all the while increasing car-related injuries and fatalities. This topic sparks controversy among it's viewers, as many (mostly kids our age) will argue that it should not be banned or made illegal. Any feedback would be appreciated, as well as critique on how I could maybe improve the topic. I will post my first draft soon. Thanks!